UFS211-ACADEMIC READING&WRITING(TASK 4)

WRITING PROCESS

In my words, stages of 'Writing Process' have step by step that are planning, drafting, revising, editing, proofreading and presenting. I start my explain with planning. Planning is a way, how and what you are wanted to writing because when we done plan overall we can start the writing. Drafting is focus on content only and forget about language such as grammar, spelling and punctuation. We must write freely and try to find the best way to communicate our ideas. The next step is revising that we must reread even the shortest writing to prevent any embarrassing mistakes. Revising means evaluating our text content and make sure we actually wrote what we intended in the planning stage. After we done at revising step we move into editing that sometimes considered part of revising. This is the time for all our grammar lovers and nitty-gritty enthusiast to meticulously scan the text for language accuracy. The fifth step is proofreading; this is one extra step that we need after revising and editing in order to locate any small mistakes we missed out on until now. On this step, it is the time to brush away those invisible blemishes before writing. The last step is presenting our writing from planning until proofreading. When we done in the presenting this is what we call 'Writing Process'.

 

UFS211-ACADEMIC READING&WRITING(TASK 5)

 WRITING A PARAGRAPH 1

       Water pollution is the contamination of water body and can affects plants and organisms living in the in water, as you know water cover 70% of the earth surface and is very important resource for people and the environment, water pollution can effects drinking water, river, lakes, and oceans all over the world.there so many causing to water pollution, for example sewage and waste water, sewage is the term used for waste water that often contains faces, urine and water from laundry, second is industrial waste, so many industrial facilities use fresh water to carry away waste from the plants and into rivers, lakes, and oceans, otherwise oil pollution also one of causing to water pollution, when oil from a tanker is a severe problem because there is such a huge quantity of oil being split into one place.As my conclusion don’t throw litter into rivers, lakes or oceans. We can also help clean up any litter you see on beaches or in rivers and lakes, make sure it is safe to collect the litter and put it in a nearby dustbin, also remember water is very important to us to living and also important to new generation.

UFS211-ACADEMIC READING&WRITING(TASK3)

(The stages of writing process)

The three stages of legal writing process

1.      Pre writing stages

·         The stages in which the assignment is organized, researched, and analyzed.

2
.      Writing stages

·         The stages in which research, analysis, and ideas are assembled into a written product.

3
.      Postwriting stages

·         The stages in which the assignment is revised, edited, and assembled in final form

Example

The assignment is to prepare an office legal memorandum addressing thequestion of when the statute limitations run in a client’s medical malpractice case. Gather all information concerning the case before you begin, including the client’s file, depositions, interrogatories, witness interviews, any other discovery information, and so on.

UFS211-ACADEMIC READING&WRITING(TASK 2)

Simple sentence

11   Abu and Ali took the bus.

2   I looked for Abu and Ali at the bus station

 Compound sentence

A compound sentence refers to a sentence made up of two independent clauses (or complete sentences) connected to one another with a coordinating conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions are easy to remember if you think of the words "FAN BOYS":

§            For   ,And, Nor, But, Or,  Yet, So

Examples of compound sentences

=   =   Abu and Ali arrived at the bus station before noon, and they left on the bus before I arrived.

=        =Abu and Ali left on the bus before I arrived, so I did not see them at the bus station.

Complex sentences

A complex sentence is made up of an independent clause and one or more dependent clauses connected to it. A dependent clause is similar to an independent clause, or complete sentence, but it lacks one of the elements that would make it a complete sentence.

Example of complex sentences

1.      while he waited at the train station

2.      after they left on the bus

Compound-complex sentences:

Example compound-complex sentence

1.   Although I like to go camping, I haven't had the time to go lately, and I haven't found anyone to go with.

•   Independent clause: "I haven't had the time to go lately"

•  Dependent clause: "Although I like to go camping... "

2.   We decided that the movie was too violent, but our children, who like to watch scary movies, thought that we were wrong.

•    Independent clause: "(but) our children thought that we were wrong"

•    Dependent clause: who like to watch scary movies

UFS211-Academic Reading& writing(TASK 1)

Love is an emotion of a strong affection and personal attachment Love is also said to be a virtue representing all of human kindness compassion and affection the unselfish loyal and benevolent concern for the good of another, Love may describe compassionate and affectionate actions towards other humans, one's self or animals.love refers to a variety of different feelings, states, and attitudes, ranging from pleasure I loved that meal to interpersonal attraction I love my partner"Love" may refer specifically to the passionate desire and intimacy of romantic love, to the sexual love of eros, to the emotional closeness of love, to the platonic love that defines friendship, or to the profound oneness or devotion of religious love or to a concept of love that encompasses all of those feelings. This diversity of uses and meanings, combined with the complexity of the feelings involved, makes love unusually difficult to consistently define, compared to other emotional states.Love may be understood as part of the survival instinct, a function to keep human beings together against menaces and to facilitate the continuation of the species